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Well i wrote this poem and i wonder if its understood.
can anyone break it down and explain it???

No motion in my Ocean
No Rain in my Clouds
I know no fear, i feel no pain
No joy, no sorrow
A heart so cold and Soul do hollow.

My shade is Grey
My sign's the Fish
Though sleep they knowest not
I know they must have had a wish
And so i wonder what they Dream
And what would cause their tiny little hearts to Gleam

I raise my head to gaze Above
heading west were mails of Dove
Blotting my aim in undenying grace
They flew below the great blue Face.
And in it sets a golden Eye
that watches you endlessly till you die.
And even this great face will cry
showering waters from the Sky
As above, so below
Yet my tainted heart wont glow.

i wanna know how welll my poetry is understood. The time i posted this one some people say they didnt understant.
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